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My Battle Orbiter

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:41 pm
by bronchidus
ok well ive been focusing more on 3ds than photoshop lately and i think this render is rather decent. I finished it on sunday mornig(rendering) and im workin on another scene now.

-the material is supposed to be like a reflective transparent type thing(its in a book i read)
-8hrs of modeling(navigating took a long ass time also includes pre-renders lol)
-2hrs of rendering(goddam raytrace and squares...)

ok i had to put up on deviantart cuz they let me put anysize i want..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217141/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217611/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52217361/

id like you input comments suggestions w/e any input at all... Please!

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:30 pm
by G.I.R.
Too much Greeble.

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:41 pm
by bronchidus
ehh there was really no other way to make it look "futuristic" w/o it its ok on everything BUT the middle part and the turrets part not on the tubes tho. I like the docking bays the most lol

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:57 pm
by Darco
wow. thats awesome. texturing that is gonna be a bitch though. hell, uv'ing it would be a nightmare.

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:12 pm
by noscottno
Looks neat, I'll take the liberity of adding you the the dA database.

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:57 am
by Nitemare
looks like a gaint disco ball in space lol.

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:08 am
by TomClancey
I don't like how you used the greeble. You just added a single greeble and kept on all the widgets. I'd suggest reading this tutorial. It helps to use greeble well. I'm not saying your scene is bad, it just could be better, if you utilized the greeble tool a bit better.

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:47 am
by Infern0
Greeble overusage?

Learn how to use them right, it doesn't look too good now.. but you'll learn, it's a nice start. ;)

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:24 am
by GametagAeonFlux
Way too reflective, and as others have said, way too much Greeble. But it's not bad...all that stuff is fixable, nice job.

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:25 pm
by bronchidus
i know i used too much greeble already stated lol. Thanks for the input too.