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Crit?
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:51 pm
by noscottno
Before I post this on deviant art, I wanted some opinions on how to make it better. I've been workin on and off for five days.
Posed on dev.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51393081/
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:25 pm
by Lambda
hmm, mehbe make the ring on the planet no sto weak looking
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:04 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
Looks very good, but it's too small for my tastes.
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:52 pm
by noscottno
Thanks, keep 'em comin'.
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:55 pm
by Dsoup
A lot better then your last two, but the planet is sort of Greenish on one side, and I personally like terragens to go with them. All in all gj.
Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 7:02 am
by SHOUTrvb
Very nice. Planet at the bottom looks pretty messed up, but a good piece all in all. I love the long canvas, but I would also make it longer next time. Then make it a print.
Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:20 am
by Xiion
the newer version is the best.
we need to come up with our concept for our submission to the next 2 spaceartists pack very soon scott. we will be taking all of our time on it, so a great concept is key here.
Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:58 am
by Ombre
Everything it too sharp.
Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 5:09 pm
by gh0570fchurch
I like it.