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First Space Scene
Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:14 pm
by Keablr
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50894295/
Alright this is my first space scene. I was really messing with light in this one. Tell me what you guys think.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:41 am
by CabooseJr
everything seems a bit too sharp.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:06 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
It's too small.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 5:28 pm
by Keablr
I know it is a bit small.
Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:16 am
by JunkfoodMan
Although its small, Its fucking awesome. I love it. Just, the Space seems a bit Monotonal, or has no colour at all.
Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:44 pm
by HPDarkness
Wouldn't that small planet in the back be completely lit, the way that the lighting is set up? Good for a first but don't over sharpen your images and try toning down the outer glow just a bit.
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:48 am
by kornkidcrazy
I like it a lot. Good job with lighting.
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:02 am
by Keablr
Thanks for the comments, my next will be bigger and less sharpened
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:28 am
by r0tten
i like it but like everyone else said, it needs to be much larger. i made the same mistake with my first scene. good job though and keep it up.
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:33 am
by noscottno
My thoughts or basically what everyone said. That's great for a first one, beats the hell out of my first.
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:07 pm
by Keablr
Thanks for the comments, and thanks NSN but I don't think my first one space scene is better than yours. But thanks for that comment