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Tell me what you think. My newest thing in a while.

looks good

Very original, nice concept.

Diamond looks too rounded for me, but the concept of it is cool. I loved that movie.

shadowkhas wrote:Diamond looks too rounded for me, but the concept of it is cool.

Also, try going into Illustrator, and making the drips flow with the shapes, instead of having sharp corners, have the drip mold with the corners and edges.

Cuda wrote:Also, try going into Illustrator, and making the drips flow with the shapes, instead of having sharp corners, have the drip mold with the corners and edges.

No, look carefully and you'll notice that it dripping behind the shapes, which is what I wanted. And I was waiting for you to post, Cuda. You're my bigger critic so far.

nice, I like it a lot. My only criticisms would be the blood and the lack of texture on the hearts, but I guess you accomplished what you wanted to :]

dude it looks like a movie cover or somtin...or should be

Thanks, it looks a lot like something off an old tv screen to me. Oh, and I'm working on a v2, Trep made a good point on better textures.

I like it a lot, but I would've coated the middle figure with a texture much like you have the rest of it; that worn look. I know, it supposed to be the main eye catcher but still the digital and soft center contrasts with the rough, worn background.

9/10 nevertheless.

Why are the shapes so sharp, almost like you just did a custom shape?
if you were in Photoshop, i would say feather it out.. if you were using Illy, your shapes wouldnt be that damn sharp in the first place.. looks good so far though

Afterparty wrote:Why are the shapes so sharp, almost like you just did a custom shape?
if you were in Photoshop, i would say feather it out.. if you were using Illy, your shapes wouldnt be that **** sharp in the first place.. looks good so far though

Your reputation proceeds you Afterparty. I'll look into fixing it up. I'm working on a v2 as we speak.

It might look better if the shapes were more faded like the rest of it. The seem to stand out a bit too much. That, or maybe don't have the text faded.
Other than that, it is really cool.

The faces of the cards look really low res and horrible, that's my only concern.

Noticed it on your myspace, and the low quality faces bugged me.

The queen being backwards at the top bugs me. I think all 3 of those cards could be blended in better.

Rest of it is good though.