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Infinite View
Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:23 pm
by Tsuin Taiyou
Version 1:
Version 2:
Comments and criticism welcome.
Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:26 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
I like v1 better than v2. I still like v2, but if I had to choose, I'd say v1.
Anyway, looks very nice, I say you work on an even larger canvas and expand this piece...it seems like this is only part of a whole piece.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:36 am
by Keablr
They both are awesome but v1 is way better, love v1 it is amazing
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:47 am
by maca_ยง
That's some awesome painting
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The first one's definatly best but I'd say get rid of the planet for both.. doesn't match the scene at all and shadow is way too harsh.
Good job overall.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:50 am
by kibito87
i like v2.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:06 am
by TomClancey
Wow, very nice. I <3 v1, but v2 is still good. Also as others said the planet doesn't seem to fit real well.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:58 pm
by gh0570fchurch
Really good. I especially like the shadow cast by the planet on the right side...
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:12 pm
by Tsuin Taiyou
Lol, I'm looking at them from my sister's computer and I see what you guysmean by the shadow...It didn't look too harsh on my computer. I'll fix it later.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:26 pm
by Xiion
i see alot that can be better, but its better than all of your latest things. you should paint on a bigger canvas.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:39 pm
by G.I.R.
Looks great; I love alot of your work, Tsuin.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:49 pm
by Cuda
Get the text away from the focal. try putting it in the low right hand corner with a light off-black(Reaally dark Purple) color.
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