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hopefully an improvement
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:03 pm
by tsm124thegreat
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:24 pm
by FloppyGecko
the content and navigation boxes dont line up with the top banner.
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:25 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
Let's put it this way...tan and red don't match.
It's also way too simple, and that white area looks bad.
Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:31 pm
by tsm124thegreat
harsh but thats ok i respect your feedback
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 1:51 pm
by [cc]z@nd!
not bad, but it can still use some work.
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 1:52 pm
by funkadelik_bob
the text at the top with the reflection isnt reflected right.
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 2:17 pm
by JunkfoodMan
Its nice, but you need to define what the text is reflecting off.
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 4:12 pm
by gh0570fchurch
I agree with Ravn pretty much, though I do like the text.
Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 4:22 pm
by -DeToX-
Text is good.
The color is bad.
The render doesn't match the color.
The reflection doesn't look good making no sense as it is.
The Gradients don't do it for this too well.
Looks too plain.
The bottom banner with the copy right sign not being close to the name looks awkward.
Keep trying though, you'll get better.