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My First Sig
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:31 pm
by Venom08
Any honest thoughts?
Constructive criticism would be nice.. i'm trying to learn.
Thanks a lot for your opinion!
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:32 pm
by Darco
thats huge.
the background seems very plain, add something to it. then we'll see how that looks.
Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 pm
by Venom08
Alright, Thanks a lot for the pointers.. i'll work on it
Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:15 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
Try blending colors. Green on red is...well, bad.
Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 10:45 pm
by Venom08
Thanks.. I kinda stopped working on that.. but then I moved on to this.. it's just a little picture I added to this one site I visit a lot. I created every little piece of this.. including the glass.. learned some 3ds
Tell me what you think.
EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"
I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame
Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 11:02 pm
by Darco
*sob* does it always have to end like this?
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 12:33 pm
by JunkfoodMan
Vector-like glass? Yes.
Emo-ness? Not really :S
Looks great, BIG Improvement.
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 8:40 pm
by Cuda
Venom08 wrote:
EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"
I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame
"If you don't like me, I will Cut my wrist veins out with my rusty wristblade, then Dye my hair black, say I'm a punk Rocker and listen to New Age."
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:34 pm
by Venom08
Cuda wrote:Venom08 wrote:
EDIT: What sounds more emo-
"Does it have to end like this?"
or
"Must we hide behind shadows?"
I'm trying to make it as emo as possible lol... please don't flame
"If you don't like me, I will Cut my wrist veins out with my rusty wristblade, then Dye my hair black, say I'm a punk Rocker and listen to New Age."
Hahahhahah... I'm trying to keep it short..
Thanks everyone for the feedback!
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:04 pm
by [cc]z@nd!
the glass is good, and the hearts fit, although it feels like they're just a brush.
as for the sig, the background and blending could use some work, but i suppose it's passable. check out some tutorials on deviantart or greycobra
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 1:19 pm
by Phosphorous
So im not the only person that will make an emo piece once in a while.
Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:19 am
by Venom08
Phosphorous wrote:So im not the only person that will make an emo piece once in a while.
Wanna show some stuff you've made?
I'm interested
Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 6:04 pm
by Phosphorous
Sure, just check out my deviant art.
http://criticalzer0.deviantart.com/