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First Space Scene

Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:04 am
by Sandman
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/43659585/

It was a collab with my friend Phil.. you can read about it on DA.. lemme know what you think

Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:09 am
by RaVNzCRoFT
I like it. The planet texture is weird, though. Blur it and it'll look better.

Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 9:04 am
by maca_ยง
I agree, the planet looks a bit weird but the rest is coming along nicely.
Use your Disp Maps :D!

Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 12:17 pm
by FleetAdmiralBacon
Interesting...

When I look up in they sky, I sure as hell don't see that. And we don't have any canyons like that either... The sky doesn't have that radioactive green glow either...
(if you haven't guessed, I live in Ohio)

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:23 pm
by Phosphorous
The landscape is too blurry

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:50 pm
by Sandman
I didn't make the landscape, Phil did that part. I tried to sharpen it up as best I could..

And yeah, the title is Tool lyrics.

"Under a dead Ohio sky, eleven is and will be waiting"

Any actual resemblance to any person. place, or thing in Ohio is purely coincidental, lol

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:56 pm
by gh0570fchurch
Love it, though the planet texture seems kinda flat. :?

Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 8:11 pm
by McFarlane
+shading
-overshadow
+extra space between the planet and terrian
-star count; +star randomness

That was the nicer way to review your lp.

Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 9:05 pm
by Sandman
Thanks for the comments, anyone else? Any suggestions? I wanna make more of these

Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 9:14 pm
by JK-47
I dunno what to say to it other than "wow". You did a great job on that Sandman :)

Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 8:45 am
by The_Hushed_Casket
The planet texture is weird - but in a good way; I like it. Great job.

Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:59 am
by Leiukemia
I think it looks pretty cool, something you would put on a postcard. :D