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WIP Scene

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:45 pm
by Darco
Image

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:46 pm
by Dr.Cox
Theres something wrong looking with his head. The mc's head. and i dont like that he just holding a Stickie.

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 7:45 am
by V0Lt4Ge
^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:17 am
by metkillerjoe
V0Lt4Ge wrote:^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.
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Master Chief is just standing there with a sticky grenade. Fix his stance alittle bit and it may look much nicer.

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:42 am
by Dr.Cox
metkillerjoe wrote:
V0Lt4Ge wrote:^^That, and is it me or is the picture low quality?

The elite looks pretty good though.
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Master Chief is just standing there with a sticky grenade. Fix his stance alittle bit and it may look much nicer.
"HA! you have a very sharp stick... and me... i have a unactivated stickie grendade.,, OWNED."

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:40 pm
by gh0570fchurch
lol mc is standing like all he wants to do is be friends with the elite. :lol:

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:02 pm
by Tural
Seems decent.

Also, apparently I'm the only one who understands the concept of "WIP," eh?

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 5:33 pm
by Dr.Cox
Tural wrote:Seems decent.

Also, apparently I'm the only one who understands the concept of "WIP," eh?
Aparrantly we are just stating what we thing is wrong about his "WIP,"eh?

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:19 pm
by Cuda
Looks like he's giving the sticky back to the elite. Add some more lighting on the MC. The elite seems to glow in comparison to him, and the Mc is all dark.

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 2:49 am
by Hyperdash
Make MC hold the nade a little more dramatic and make it glowing. For the elite I think a ES would look better then a stick.

Advanced Alien grenade > a sharp glowing stick

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 1:44 pm
by Infern0
Okay, you got the scene but the atmosphere isn't quite right. You need to tune the lights, add some moisture to the air(to make it look thicker and realister/cooler), in other words, just make the air look foggier.. but not too much.

Nice job, but you have some work to do!

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:50 pm
by BEEF!!!
Video post->Glow on the grenade (Provided this is Max).
Surround them in fog.
Create->Helpers->Atmospherics->Box gizmo.
Draw out 4 boxes surrounding the seen.
Click one of the boxes and click the button add and click volumetric fog.
Do the same for the rest.
Adjust settings of fog as you want.
Render.

Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:57 pm
by Darco
actually, i have volumetric light in that, its just turned way down. and i have one with video post but it wasnt that good looking. ill post it if you want.

and also, thanks for the advice. ill be sure to use it when i open max next.

Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 5:12 am
by Infern0
Oh yeah.

Use GI, it will make the scene look brilliant ;p.

Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:04 pm
by Darco
small update.


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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 12:53 am
by JK-47
It's pretty good, but the room could be a bit better. I don't know if you planned on making it more scenic, but i'm just putting the suggestion out there :P

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:43 am
by Cuda
Much Better, but do a bit more with the grenade. It just seems... pathetic compared to the rest of it. This is Master Chief, He's suppose to be some kind of futuristic Rambo -ish guy, but why does he only have a plasma grenade? Give him a smaller gun, like a pistol or something.

Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:18 am
by Darco
ok. and yeah im gonna add soemthing to the scene, i just dont know what yet.

Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 12:03 pm
by gh0570fchurch
Try making mc look like he's ready to fight. Possibly in a fighting stance, with his feet spread out a little more.

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 3:29 pm
by benman08
http://media.putfile.com/Tests-82
Made awhile back, me and Darco are fixing it up. I'm basically redoing the animation.