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Covenant Invasion

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 2:34 pm
by gh0570fchurch
My first Deviation!

Now, before you click on the link, I'd like to make something clear, and maybe you guys can help me with this. I'm somewhat satisfied with it, but there's something I'm confused about. The Covenant cruisers don't really have much depth to them. How would I go about making that look better?

Well, anyway, here you go:

Covenant Invasion

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:22 pm
by Darco
maybe change the reflections.
and change the formations, they look a little fake.
is this done in max?

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:48 pm
by gh0570fchurch
part of it was done in gmax, but mostly in PScs2

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 11:29 pm
by Darco
maybe have them flying from behind the camera, like 2 infront and one just overhead. and then the jets coming in formation.

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 8:24 am
by V0Lt4Ge
The text kinda kills it. =\

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 6:03 pm
by Phosphorous
The Halo doesnt make a smooth transition to the foreground.

Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:44 pm
by gh0570fchurch
I don't really like it, but I think it's okay for my first.