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Here is my newest sig comment critisize (probably spelled that wrong) tell me what you like about it, whatever:

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The render looks strange Mb its just me

no it's not just you

at first i didn't recognize that it was the master chief dual weilding smgs

Patrickssj6 wrote:The render looks strange Mb its just me

Very. A lot of empty space also.

No depth at all, and the diagonal lines just make it harder to make stuff out. And I dont remember the SMG's front handgrip to be so jagged .

That must be where the render was cut off. But yeah, I agree with everyone above. Take out the scanlines. They don't fit at all. Creative quote, though.

guess u guys are right i'll probably re-do it when i have the time

I think the background color blends so much with the render that the render is hard to see

yeah im probably going to resize the pic and then change the color of the background

The handgrip on the SMG looks like a bayonet, recut out the render, too.

here i tried to redo it but i dont really like it:

my suggestions:
add better text
make it so we can see the render
blend the render into the background

so far its a 4/10 but its getting better

The new one looks like poop. The old one was better than that.

The colors dont match, and the background, well I cant tell what the background is. You get kudos for image placement though .

Spartan Sniper wrote:my suggestions:
add better text
make it so we can see the render
blend the render into the background

so far its a 4/10 but its getting better

What I was thinking.

ok yeah use new text
Make the BG have more Depth it looks almost like just clouds just to thick brushed i guess the render should be blendered a bit more yes it has the same color but not blendered make a sig next time lighter