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This is my first "vector". I dont know if it's considered vector but this is it. It says "Simplicity" but it really is'nt. Post some things that are wrong with it. I have a different version and I'm working on another.

R & C

the planet is distorted, and the shadow of the flying thing is obviously the same shadow of the dude pointing behind the hill. also, its not a vector unless you made it in illustrator.

Whats illustrator?

adobe illustrator. it makes real vectors (i.e. ones that are based on mathematical equations, and therefore do not become pixelated when zoomed in)

Yeah, they can be made into any size without loss of quality. But...I agree with the things Chron1c said.

Chron1c wrote:and the shadow of the flying thing is obviously the same shadow of the dude pointing behind the hill.

No, its not.

The hills look like an ass

And my main concern there is the planet. It's really distorted.

lxNicktardxl wrote:

Chron1c wrote:and the shadow of the flying thing is obviously the same shadow of the dude pointing behind the hill.

No, its not.

where's the shadow of the kite string?

I thought I fixed the planet? I guess not. And also the kite string dosent need a shadow. So what do you guys think for my first though?

well

the shadows of the two people arent directionally correct
missing two shadows (kite w/ string and other person behind hill
planet is weird
and

jks wrote:The hills look like an ass

I just noticed that none of the shadows are corresponding in direction. Also, the stars could use some work.

I dont know how to do stars so I just used a 1 px white brush.