The Fallen

d3mon · Post by **d3mon** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:56 pm

Yea well i'm new to sketching i've just never really tried to draw anything much before.

So here this is its meant to be a Fallen Angel.

And i touched it up in photoshop 7.

Sketch

Touched up

Please rate */10

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:08 pm

Touched Up FTW

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:19 pm

7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.

Jordan · Post by **Jordan** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:54 pm

Wasn't really impressed with the initial drawing, but the touchups make it look really nice.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:02 pm

Yeah, I didn't like the drawing much but I really like the photoshoped version. Very cool.

d3mon · Post by **d3mon** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:55 am

Thx guys and yea i know i'm bad at drawing but photoshop eases the pain

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:04 am

Armed Civilian wrote:Touched Up FTW

destroyer69 · Post by **destroyer69** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:59 am

Looks very nice.
Good job.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:50 pm

Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 1:44 pm

Ombre wrote:Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.

How about the second one Mister Elitist?

Andrew_b · Post by **Andrew_b** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 2:36 pm

nice..it looks cool, the second one i mean. the first one is better than i can draw

( i think my sigs show that)

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 3:15 pm

Edited one looks great

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 6:45 pm

SHOUTrvb wrote:
Ombre wrote:Initial one look like a 30 second sketch, and lacks value contrast.
How about the second one Mister Elitist?

Yea, and I was the one being unnecessarily rude?
The second one is better, not too sure about the coloring, but I guess it works out. Overall it would have turned out much better on some nice drawing paper, you can always redraw it and use this one as a study though.

youhoo7 · Post by **youhoo7** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:35 pm

SHOUTrvb wrote:7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.

well sure...but sketches arent allways supposed..to be full...by that i ment his sketch is what it is.....a sketch...so for a sketch i give it a 10/10

d3mon · Post by **d3mon** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:45 pm

thx guys and ombre's right it was a thirty second sketch he wasn't being rude at all but just giving his opinion and when i get some drawing paper i might try to create a larger peice.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:51 pm

youhoo7 wrote:
SHOUTrvb wrote:7/10, I really like it. I think it would look better as a part of a large piece though.

well sure...but sketches arent allways supposed..to be full...by that i ment his sketch is what it is.....a sketch...so for a sketch i give it a 10/10

He can still retain the gesture style if he adds some background to it, even something as simple as a wall and a floor can vastly improve a drawing.