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Wanna show off your Sig/Avatar/artwork. Well this is the place to do it!
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This is my first grungy sig in like 6 months. so go easy.

here it is.

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Contradicting flow, (and with a name like "Too Fast For You" you want it to be as Streamlined as possible.) and no depth.
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I've determined that you need to stop using brushes. They're spoiling your potential.
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very good more maybe add more filters to it like a slight motion blur at the angle the car is moving to give it that streamline flow.
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Yeah, the background goes from up-left to bottom-right, and the render goes from top-right to bottom-left. They don't fit too well. It might look nice if you horizontally flip the background, so that the render and background might flow a little better.
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Post by testofskill »

thank you guys for your comments, you are helping me improve my Grafix designing skills.

Much appreciated.
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