Yeah, it's definitely to bright in there as Veegie mentioned. The lights are really weird too... you can't actually see the light in mid-air unless it's bouncing off particles in the air. It shouldn't be that dense.
But other than that, nice, I like the detail map you used, it really shows around the waist area.
EDIT: H2R cheated. >_<
The SMG has a weird box on it (the one closest to us), and part of it is like...missing? Look at the right side, it looks like the clip is missing but part of it is there. And his right arm's thumb is in the SMG.
And his upper body seems pushed forward too much, look at the waist.
But the rest is cool.
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The bump seems smooshed into intrusions etc.
It's odd.
No specific pronounced areas.
Hijikata wrote:The fact you love Jesus doesn't change the fact you're a fucking mental patient. It just means you're a mental patient with a great imaginary friend.
Veegie wrote:I'll be adding to this in a bit, mainly because I'm about to head out for a bit.
But submit your work here or if you choose to keep it private for some reason. You can email me at [email protected]
Submit your work, and we'll try to get it up (if reasonable) in the gallery within a day or so depending on how 'big' this gets.
{HPC}midwaymas, what the FUCK are you trying to start?
All he did was compliment me, and here you are trying to start shit.
Oh, and bad choice of words.
An illusion is something appears to be good, but doesn't exist.
Leave me topic and don't respond to this.
Hijikata wrote:The fact you love Jesus doesn't change the fact you're a fucking mental patient. It just means you're a mental patient with a great imaginary friend.
I already pointed that out, and we've established that the post was stupid.
Moving on.
Hijikata wrote:The fact you love Jesus doesn't change the fact you're a fucking mental patient. It just means you're a mental patient with a great imaginary friend.
Texture is off (MC is not speckled) and the feet look like they need some serious smoothing. Visor seems a bit intense. He seems to bright. Not bad for a first though.