[model][skin] Sniper Rifle Doohicky

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:29 am

Here's my first model that I'll post on this website. In my opinion, its okay, but not really that good. Perhaps your opinions will differ, and thats what matters when I'm going to make mds, so I decided to post it anyway.

Ok, please try to keep your criticism constructive, nothing like "ew that sucks" or "you can't model at all" please.

Now, for a description of the model itself. It's basically a sniper with changed around dimesions and a new scope. The feet on the bottom are a bit different, the lower area is also different. The back of the sniper changed alot, unfortunately nobody gets to see that part. I had a bit of a problem with the scope on the left side. It's not too noticeable, simply because it is on the left side. The skin itself is pretty simple, it cleans up some of the graininess and colors the scope a less saturated blue.

Okay, enjoy if you can.

flea925 · Post by **flea925** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:39 am

neat execution, but overused concept. Try to be a bit more creative.
7/10
skin 8/10
edit: show us the full model in your modeling program

bcnipod · Post by **bcnipod** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:00 am

needs a better glass piece part of the skin.

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:13 am

Ok, here's a picture of it in Misfit Modeler.

hiheyhello · Post by **hiheyhello** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:44 pm

learn how to take apart the model.
You can take off the bipod the clip,and the front part of the barrel, use tose pieces to make a better scope/stand for the sniper

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:54 pm

I was thinking of taking the stand off, but I decided not to.

flea925 · Post by **flea925** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:05 pm

9/10 3p model

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:13 pm

flea925 wrote:9/10 3p model

I didn't make a third person model.

flea925 · Post by **flea925** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:16 pm

i mean in misfit

joemammy47 · Post by **joemammy47** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:54 pm

I really like it. Could use some tweaking a bit and possibly a skin if anyone gets around to it, other than that, beautiful.

8.5/10

DeadHamster · Post by **DeadHamster** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:55 pm

Somebody's a little hypocrite, mr. round-scopes-are-the-suck

It's okay, but the scope floats too much in the front. Make it look more secured.

Cobain · Post by **Cobain** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:06 pm

to be quite honest i don't like it much at all...
its missing the wow factor.

its an ok model but nothing that would get my download.
-I don't like how you have the bipod...the top part of it looks stretched and uggo.

-The round part above where the left hand is, doesn't look good that way.
-scope is fail
-you skin didn't help either.

but you are on your way...
keep practicing.

super_man916 · Post by **super_man916** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:31 pm

agreed cobain

Andrew_b · Post by **Andrew_b** » Mon Jul 07, 2008 7:07 pm

I agree it doesn't look secured at all.

Try looking at some scope references.

Cobain · Post by **Cobain** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:09 am

oh and one other thing about this dooku.
when posting a topic don't ever say that you don't think it looks good, cause if that is the case, then you shouldn't bother posting at all.
put pride into your work.

and if you said that to hide from criticism, don't waist your time on that either.
take the criticism for what it is, if it wasn't for the members the critiqued me as much as they did, i would never have learned what i know now.

this model isn't like allot of the other remodels i have seen from people, its actually...ehhh well it shows more time was put into, cause there isn't any serious stretching, or stray verts.

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:10 am

Ok I'll try and see what I can do. If you look at the Misfit model, you can see it is secured though.

Cobain · Post by **Cobain** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:11 am

yeah, and i really like your stock, it looks amazing, haha now make the rest of the model do that stock some justice.

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:42 am

Cobain wrote:yeah, and i really like your stock, it looks amazing, haha now make the rest of the model do that stock some justice.

Forgive me for not knowing my firemarms but what is a stock?

Edit:
By the way Dead Hamster, I didn't say they sucked, I just said that almost everyone used them and I was a bit sick of them.
Edit2:
New scope support.

flea925 · Post by **flea925** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:11 am

Cobain wrote:yeah, and i really like your stock, it looks amazing, haha now make the rest of the model do that stock some justice.

Dooku, a stock is the butt of the rifle, you know, the rear

Kount-Dooku · Post by **Kount-Dooku** » Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:12 am

flea925 wrote:
Cobain wrote:yeah, and i really like your stock, it looks amazing, haha now make the rest of the model do that stock some justice.
Dooku, a stock is the butt of the rifle, you know, the rear

Okay, thanks.

Edit:

I messed with the skin here....