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D-day:chiefs beach

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 5:46 am
by Dust'nmud
D-DAY: CHIEF'S BEACH

PROLOUGE:

RED COMMAND SENT AN INVASION FORCE TO A SMALL BUT IMPORTANT ISLAND BUT IT WAS DESTOYED BY A AIR RAID AND ONLY ONE SHIP MADE IT, BUT THEN WAS DESTROYED BY THE ARTILLERY. A PIECE OF THE SHIP WASHED UP TO THE SHORE OF THE BLUE BASE CONTAINING THE ONLY SURVIVORS. BUT BLUE TEAM HAD ITS SHARE OF BAD LUCK ALSO, AN EARTHQUAKE SUDDLENY APPEARED AFTER THE DESTRUCTION OF THE TRANSPORT SHIP, DESTROYING THE TELEPORTERS AND BLOCKADED ALL OF THE TUNNELS. WITH NO WAY OF GETTING OFF THE ISLAND, BLUE TEAM MUST STAY AND DEFEND AGAINST THE ONLY SURVIVORS OF THE SHIP WHICH HAVE HUNKERED DOWN IN THE ONLY PIECE OF THE SHIP THAT STILL FLOATS. THE SPARTAN WARRIORS!

RED TEAM:

RED TEAM STARTS OUT INSIDE RED BASE WITH TELEPORTERS TO OUTSIDE A DESTROYED, WASHED UP SHIP, EQUIPPED WITH ONLY ONE MACHINE GUN TURRET FOR COVERING FIRE. AN ARMORY WILL BE SENT TO SUPPORT RED TROOPS, THERE WILL BE NO AIR COVER, THE SHIP WE SENT HAD ITS CANNON OFF LINE DUE TO A AIRSTRIKE AND LITTLE COVER WILL BE THERE WHEN STORMING THE BEACH (A FEW BARICADES) AND PIECES OF THE SHIP THAT HAVE BEEN BLOWN OFF.

BLUE TEAM:

BLUE TEAM DOES NOT CONTROL THE ENTIRE ISLAND, A EARTHQUAKE HAS BLOCKADED EVERY TUNNEL AND THE TELEPORTERS ARE MALUFUNCTIONING SO THEY ARE SHUT DOWN FOR SAFTY REASONS. WE ONLY HAVE ONE ROCKET TURRET AND 3 MACHINE GUN TURRETS FOR THE FRONT LINE, BUT BLUE TEAM HAS SOMTHING THE REDS DONT HAVE. ARTILLERY. RANDOM EXPLOSIONS WILL APPEAR ON THE BEACH. TO SLOW OR KILL THE ENEMY TROOPS

KNOWN BUGS:

IT IS POSSIBLE TO GET AROUND THE ROCK BARRIER, BUT WHAT FUN IS THAT?

ANY OTHERS THAT I DONT KNOW OF PLEASE TELL ME!

-DUST'NMUD

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 6:46 am
by UnknownSilens
I've ahd this idea before, but on a different section of the beach.

Look's good, dling, 7/10.

Also, don't post all in caps.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 6:48 am
by nintendo9713
It looks like a good concept. Good job. Try not to post in all caps, it annoys people on the internet.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 6:57 am
by Philly
Interesting indeed. :o

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:01 am
by Dust'nmud
sorry about the caps.... :oops: wont happen again....
thanks for the criticism! if you have anything to say to improve on it let me know!

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:10 am
by JK-47
IT LOOKS GOOD I THINK I'LL DOWNLOAD IT IF I CAN FIND MY HALO PC DISK BECAUSE I LOST IT.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:20 am
by Dust'nmud
......point taken.....
no more caps.... :(
should i submit in motm JK?

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:22 am
by JK-47
That would be up to you.
I'd say you'd have a good chance at the top 3.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:27 am
by Dust'nmud
done!

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:34 am
by L0d3x
Sorry but this doesn't really impress me...
Beach assault itself is a good idea, however this doesn't look very well executed imo.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:36 am
by Dust'nmud
what could i do to make it better? :?:

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 7:44 am
by L0d3x
Wait I just noticed this is PC section in fact.
Forgot it has limited modding options :p

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:02 am
by bcnipod
L0d3x wrote:Sorry but this doesn't really impress me...
Beach assault itself is a good idea, however this doesn't look very well executed imo.
that and the fact that this is exactly the same as a log mod, except you used covie boxes instead of logs.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:09 am
by Dust'nmud
it was the best thing to use for debris on the beach

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:11 am
by bcnipod
I would have used the Human shields or some rocks. the covie stuff looks out of place.

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 8:13 am
by Dust'nmud
also its V1 ill do that next time!
thx

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 1:29 pm
by Mr.Brightside
Eh, looks semi-lame.

4/10

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 4:30 pm
by Amit
It would be best to add some Human deployable shields(bulky ones that don't move) for those 3-D x things that stop boats from getting farther up the beach. Put a few in the water here and there and a bunch of them on the beach for cover. Use logs for random pieces of debris and cover(if you're lucky) on the beach. Lessen the amount of covie objects but don't totally eliminate them.

Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 5:32 am
by Dust'nmud
thx i think that i get it pur more debris less of it covie stuff

Re:

Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:42 am
by OrangeBox
UnknownSilens wrote:I've ahd this idea before, but on a different section of the beach.

Look's good, dling, 7/10.

Also, don't post all in caps.
But it's capslock!
Cruise Control for cool!