I'm so proud!

santamaycry · Post by **santamaycry** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 6:46 pm

Ok, i still havnt rigged it to a biped yet...but whocares?

rossmum · Post by **rossmum** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 11:06 pm

You made that? Nice.

scar tissue · Post by **scar tissue** » Fri Sep 16, 2005 12:57 am

Not trying to insult you but, some constructive criticism:

1. The visor is wrong (I'm pretty sure you would know that though)
2. That green isn't right. His green is darker and less saturated.
3. Both the Bump Map and Specular Map don't seem to be there. (if they are, they are very unnoticable, giving the MC a less realistic look)

Other than that, he looks great. Sorry for the criticism. I used to make crazy renders and my MC's looked almost real and yours looks cartoony and I just wanted to help.

A group that is really good with stuff like that are them Methane Breathers at Yayap.com. They make renders and are very skilled at what they do. Very helpful as well.

Good luck with your renders![/url]

santamaycry · Post by **santamaycry** » Fri Sep 16, 2005 7:22 am

scar tissue wrote:Not trying to insult you but, some constructive criticism:

1. The visor is wrong (I'm pretty sure you would know that though)
2. That green isn't right. His green is darker and less saturated.
3. Both the Bump Map and Specular Map don't seem to be there. (if they are, they are very unnoticable, giving the MC a less realistic look)

Other than that, he looks great. Sorry for the criticism. I used to make crazy renders and my MC's looked almost real and yours looks cartoony and I just wanted to help.

A group that is really good with stuff like that are them Methane Breathers at Yayap.com. They make renders and are very skilled at what they do. Very helpful as well.

Good luck with your renders![/url]

O i know, i should have mentioned...its not finished yet

, thats just the furthest i have ever gotten, ill keep you guys updated

rossgemuend · Post by **rossgemuend** » Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:19 pm

good start, i recomend using the camo bump as the bump map though. if you don't know how, just ask

santamaycry · Post by **santamaycry** » Sun Sep 25, 2005 4:34 am

I'm not sure how to get a good visor though

[CV] Jordan · Post by **[CV] Jordan** » Sun Sep 25, 2005 4:53 am

still doesnt seem bumped enough.
if you dont know how to do reflections and stuff, just wait for some tuts

theres like 3 already in the tutorial section and 2 of them are coming out with reflections soon.

scar tissue · Post by **scar tissue** » Sun Sep 25, 2005 5:06 am

It is looking better. Just keep working at it.